Green Bottle

March 11, 2008

The green bottle

of shampoo laughs

at my bald head

by bf

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2 Responses to “Green Bottle”

  1. Julie Cain Says:

    Shampoo cannot laugh…this is personification…not done in haiku. Suggest:
    the green bottle
    of shampoo laughable
    for my bald head

    now the shampoo is no longer laughing, but we are sharing the joke with you.


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